Whos M? Brother
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Whos M? Brother
The Hitman Chirs Sat Dec 19, 2009 7:51 pm
The Hitman Chirs is getting ready for his match with Chris storm, then his phone ring.
The Hitman Chirs:Hey,who is this calling my phone? Because if you the kids who prank calling me, when I found you I'll mess your faces up so badly your going to have to use a cup to pee!!!!
M:Who the hell I talking to is that you, little brother? I should know that's you because your one of the most rude people I know. So how you doing little man?
The Hitman Chirs:I doing good, I need your help to handle something.So can you help me out?
M:Yeah I help out you, You wont me to take some one out for you again like I did to Jimmy an 12 grade.
The Hitman Chirs:I remember that, you turn that guy face into pasta.So when can you come?
M:OK I come, but I wont one thing from you an that's for you to say that your stupid.
The Hitman Chirs: OK, I'm stupid so hurry up an come!!!
M:I already there little stupid brother.
A knock on the door, the Hitman Chirs opens it up and gets uppercut.An fly all the way down to the ground gasping for air.
M:So who we going for?
Then the scene cuts away
The Hitman Chirs:Hey,who is this calling my phone? Because if you the kids who prank calling me, when I found you I'll mess your faces up so badly your going to have to use a cup to pee!!!!
M:Who the hell I talking to is that you, little brother? I should know that's you because your one of the most rude people I know. So how you doing little man?
The Hitman Chirs:I doing good, I need your help to handle something.So can you help me out?
M:Yeah I help out you, You wont me to take some one out for you again like I did to Jimmy an 12 grade.
The Hitman Chirs:I remember that, you turn that guy face into pasta.So when can you come?
M:OK I come, but I wont one thing from you an that's for you to say that your stupid.
The Hitman Chirs: OK, I'm stupid so hurry up an come!!!
M:I already there little stupid brother.
A knock on the door, the Hitman Chirs opens it up and gets uppercut.An fly all the way down to the ground gasping for air.
M:So who we going for?
Then the scene cuts away
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Re: Whos M? Brother
Dangerous Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:06 pm
OOC: Sorry if i'm wrong, but is that the way your character is supposed to talk? If not the grammer of your roleplay needs to improve for it gets sort of confusing.
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Re: Whos M? Brother
KamiKazie44 Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:15 pm
I edited it and placed in show. Myself and Joe help him out on this. 
I'm glad he is trying though.
I'm glad he is trying though.
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Re: Whos M? Brother
Dangerous Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:34 pm
oh ok...was just checking...oh BTW what happened to all of our old post?
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Re: Whos M? Brother
KamiKazie44 Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:40 pm
There in the thread "Show Archive" I think its called..
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have a problem
The Hitman Chirs Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:50 pm
Sorry about the grammar and I going to try harder next time
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